We wear slippers on the surface of the moon
Slip slip slippy
We all fall down
Inhaling deep breaths
Exhaling stars
Every day a new start
Every night due rest
The radio burrs
Static dances
We will have to catch up
The world still turns
Though we are still
We wear slippers on the surface of the moon
Slip slip slippy
We all fall down.
If I could exhale stars just once, I would feel that my life had not been lived in vain. Love the imagery here, Jae!
ReplyDeleteThanks Magical!
DeletePutting on these slippers to dance alone in the night!
ReplyDelete"The world still turns
Though we are still"
So we may as well break the stillness. Gorgeous.
Thanks so much Susan
DeleteI also love the image of exhaling stars. Spectacular!
ReplyDeleteI would love to exhale a star! Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Bekkie
DeleteIt reminds me of a children's rhyme....but so much more. If I could exhale stars, I'd be in heaven!
ReplyDeleteThank you Vivian
DeleteI love the whole idea of wearing slippers on the moon, and ADORE "Exhaling stars." Wow!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Sherry
DeleteBeautiful imagery, Jae!
ReplyDeleteThanks Khaya
DeleteAshes, ashes...and moonlit feet. wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThank you De
Delete"We wear slippers on the moon" I would if I could!
ReplyDeleteI believe you can! Thanks Yvonne
DeleteVery interesting thoughts. Silly, but something more too. I liked it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Rob
DeleteI love the idea of wearing slippers on the moon
ReplyDeleteThanks Truedessa
DeleteLike the nursery rhyme reference in this one... a tishoo a tishoo we all fall down...written about the bubonic plague..sort of a combined menacing and surreal feeling to it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rallentanda a great insight!
DeleteI love the image of exhaling stars! Gorgeously written, Jae!💞
ReplyDeleteThanks Sanaa 💙
DeleteThank you for taking me along, to your adventure on the moon. I will also wear slippers, and we will "slip slip slippy," together.
ReplyDeleteThat sounds good! Thank you Annell
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