A million years howl
When voices whisper among the trees
We are on the forest floor
Looking up
The leaves are crisp and brown
Spidery veins patterned from root to tip
We collect them up
They are like ancient paper in our hands
Stories unfolding
Wishes scattered
Our feet ache from the wooded path
We imagine taking off our shoes and socks
Let the moss cushion our steps
The damp ground moisten our blisters
But we decide to keep walking
Following the path
Listening to the trees
It is as if it has always been
And will continue to be
An owl hoots in the distance
We would like to see his wings unfold
As he flies off to the moon
But he is too quick for us
All we can feel is his song
The trees are full of life
They breathe and dance
They have borne witness to many a traveller
And dreamer
They are a guide and a light
They understand the whispers
Absorb up all the howls
We are glad to tread this path
It will lead us to morning
And carry us home.
Leaves like ancient paper....you took me into the forest, the forever feeling we get there.....i love the owl and "all we can feel is his song". This is a beautiful poem. I especially love the lines that carry you home at the end.
ReplyDeleteWow. this is an excellent poem and satisfying in all kinds of ways. The leaves like ancient paper, the owl. Especially the owl. The last three lines are remarkable.
ReplyDeleteNice write, JR. I was walking with you, confident our guides would get us home. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteJae,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your wonderful forest adventure. Owls add so much to the whole experience..and the trees never stop impacting with giving and absorbing our visits to them...
"They understand the whispers
ReplyDeleteAbsorb up all the howls
We are glad to tread this path"
So much wisdom in understanding the language of the trees. Happy you dropped by my blog today Jae
Much💞love
This is incredibly exquisite!❤️ I especially like; "They are like ancient paper in our hands/Stories unfolding/Wishes scattered."
ReplyDeleteAncient paper, owls, and safe passage home. Beautiful, Jae!
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful and descriptive poem about your walk in the forest Jae. It feels as though you really enjoy imagining such scenes in your mind.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you’ve taken the title of Sanaa’s prompt and developed it into an eerie poem reminiscent of hansel and Gretel. I love the fine details of the leaves, crisp and brown, with spidery veins, like ancient paper, and stories unfolding – and the owl!
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeous - love your imagery.
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful! "like ancient paper in our hands
ReplyDeleteStories unfolding
Wishes scattered" and then I love how it IS the path that has always witnessed and witnesses still.
This is nothing short of wonderful!
ReplyDeleteAnd eerie scene here. You did justice to the prompt!
ReplyDeleteThis is full of visuals...love "leaves as ancient paper". It feels mystical.
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