Wednesday, 3 October 2018

Balance

The white pages
Scream a song
We are balanced in the in between place
A thousand powder passes our lips
The gate crashes
All about us is falling down
We take a shot
And another
Numbers barely make a difference now
Count them in
Count them out
We wash in cool water
Let the waves lap our feet
Wait a while
The air is tranquil
Balanced.

10 comments:

  1. The in between place is neither here nor there. There used to be a lot of pubs in England called the Halfway House; is that where you are then Jae?

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  2. Sometimes in between space is the safest space.

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  3. Numbers barely make a difference now
    Count them in
    Count them out... you do write so wonderfully!

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  4. Whew! To stay balanced while a song screams is amazing. And with all of the activity of pills, powders and shots, the tranquility of the air and the narrator is beyond reason. A powerful poem.

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  5. A beautiful write, Jae!!...xoxoxo

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  6. The in between place sounds a bit precarious, what with the falling and crashing all around. But it is so worth finding. Smiles.

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  7. I like 'The white pages / Scream a song', a place of safety in those pages, perhaps the in-between place in which they are balanced. We all need refuge from the crashing and falling down, where 'The air is tranquil'.

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  8. The space between tranquility and turmoil is nobody's

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  9. Whew! Sometimes it seems to take a lot of turbulence in our lives to achieve balance.

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  10. I like the in between places... that’s where real life happens. Love it!

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