We are made of poems
Sweet lines
On lazy summer afternoons
Time passes in a haze
We are both here and not
Skipping
Tripping
Counting down the minutes
All will be lost
But there's so much we have yet to find
We crunch syllables on our tongue
Savour every pinch
Inch down the page
Filling the white
With sure black marks
She claps her hands
This is where we belong
We are made of poems
Sweet lines
On lazy summer afternoons.
Sometimes it takes a long time to realise we are made of poems. What a delight it is to lie like scoundrels or tell the truth yet still find readers like what they see not knowing which is which. How good it is to escape to our land of verse.
ReplyDelete"We crunch syllables on our tongue
ReplyDeleteSavour every pinch"....Delicious lines indeed. Yes, 'we are made of poems' :)
"We crunch syllables on our tongue
ReplyDeleteSavour every pinch"....Delicious lines indeed. Yes, 'we are made of poems' :)
"We crunch syllables on our tongue
ReplyDeleteSavour every pinch
Inch down the page"
Nice.
I love the vibe Alice always brings to the table --- the joy and lightheartedness that is so very needed.
"We are made of poems"! You are definitely made of poems. Crunch away!
ReplyDeleteEveryone is made of poems---if only they would tell them to us as you do!
ReplyDeleteJust lovely...beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteYou are made of poems, and sweet lines, indeed!!!
ReplyDeleteI LOVE this poem, especially the sweet lines on lazy summer afternoons, and crunching the syllables.......delightful! A new favourite.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely blooming love this, Jae! Yes, we are made of poems! I love the dreaminess of this poem, its up-and-down rhythm, skipping and tripping down my screen, and the lines:
ReplyDelete'We crunch syllables on our tongue
Savour every pinch
Inch down the page
Filling the white
With sure black marks'.
Luv the contentment of being poet
ReplyDelete"She claps her hands
This is where we belong"
Much💛💐love
What a poet's poem you've written! You had me at the first line: "We are made of poems"
ReplyDeleteI love this poem. Most definitely your best I have yet to read. We are made of stardust and poems. Oh my yes!
ReplyDeletea schooling poem is all messy with numbers and grade evaluations.
ReplyDeletevivid imagery.
Love crunching the syllables.
ReplyDeleteI love the imagery and the phrasing, beautifully done!
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