There are thieves
Dripping off the walls
The windows
They had no air
I could not touch
What was
What was
Lost
Air is what we craved
Space to breathe
We did not rest
Sleep
Close our eyes
For over three hundred days
Now
Now we ask for them to see us differently
They do not care
They locked us up
They did their job
We got what we were due
Help
How outrageous to ask
We remember the woman
The woman we did not see
Who talked to us as we stood
Jittery in the church yard
Should we
Shouldn’t we
She said it was right
To call someone
If we needed
Help
But we know
We know how help
Scrapes and burns
As our skin drops off
The thieves wait underground
To pounce when we are alone
Again
We are alone
Again
The thieves don’t look for silver or gold
They look for something more satisfying to devour
A gorgeous feast
That has no more meaning than air
They look for me
I will never forget
There are three hundred more days
Left
To deceive them.
What is that you bring out...it is so very intense... sometimes very difficult to pickup...yet deceiving the deception itself needs enormous effort..
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Too much effort Ramesh..but hopefully one day..one year it will be simpler..happy new year to you
DeleteIndeed, Jae, we both know how help scrapes and burns. Bury yourself in the deception, but don't get lost. We want you with us.
ReplyDeleteAlways keep one eye on the surface thank you Monica..pleased to have one safe place..thank you
Deleteplease don;t lsoe yourself JaeRose I wish you a year filled with joy and safety.
ReplyDeleteJ will be ok Sheilagh..thank you..wishing you a very good new year also
DeleteIt sounds as though those memories are still eating away. It is as though the fear of a return is giving the narrator nightmares. This is not treatment but torture. You have been spilling your heart out for some time but the ones that need to listen, never do. Freedom is very hard won Jae.
ReplyDeletePerhaps the best people listen though Old Egg..I don't want to fall back into the web of those helper spiders..they are mean..when we tumble back into the stars and the red blanket we are free..thank you..as ever..
DeleteWe are never truly free of those who would "help" us. We can only live in a way that proves them wrong.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ann.. A very special person I'm my life always said 'living well is the best revenge'
DeleteSaddnes and darkness... the theif does steal so much more than silver and gold!
ReplyDeleteYes silver and gold are worthless in comparison...thank you Bethe
DeleteCreepy and macabre, very effectively described. No air no help just being underground! Nicely Jae!
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Thank you kindly Hank..creepy and macabre sums it up perfectly!
DeleteIt's a new year, and Sunday Scribblings 2 is a new place for prompts for writers of whatever genre. I was sorry to see Sunday Scribblings go, so I decided to continue the tradition. Each Wednesday, I will post a new prompt. At midnight Friday, you will be able to link your writing to this site: Sunday Scribblings 2
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That's fantastic Magical..thank you so much for taking up the mantel..I am sure you will be a fine host but should you ever need any prompt words or such like I could have a go..look forward to seeing you there..how delightful!
DeleteIt's so annoying the way the people who should help just assume the problem is that you didn't ask when you needed it. Yeah, maybe asking will help, but plenty of times it actually makes things worse. Especially when the thieves are around.
ReplyDeleteI think the latter is sadly true Alice..but we must put on paper bag (with air holes) and hit the stage with all our gusto..thank you and happy new year to you
DeleteJae, I did not participate this week. I like your poem as ever. I thought you might like my post today.
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Thank you as ever Christopher..am on my way over!
DeleteGorgeous feasts tend to transform one into a walking dart board. Makes the natives edgy and sharpen their spears. Best keep them to yourself. Tea is good. Biscuits will lead to mince pies fruit cake and ultimately a heavy duty swimming programme:)
ReplyDeleteWell I have had all the mince pies so I guess I am a fruitcake away from the swimming programme..thank you Rallentanda..we will wipe the bullseye off our back ;)
DeleteA great sense of oppression and domination in this; just a flicker of hope at the end.
ReplyDeleteThank you J Cosmo..as long as there is a flicker we will be ok..hopefully!
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