As much as I dislike snow, Jae, I love its silence and seeing a trail of footprints – the best ones are left by animals. You captured the feeling in the final lines.
I am glad to say I am not well acquainted with snow (I hate the cold) – but pictures of it are pretty, and your poem conjures up some lovely images and ideas for me.
You're right, Jae, there is a quantum leap needed between thought and action.
ReplyDeleteAs much as I dislike snow, Jae, I love its silence and seeing a trail of footprints – the best ones are left by animals. You captured the feeling in the final lines.
ReplyDelete"I like leaving behind a path of footprints" I think we all wish to make our own tracks. Perhaps, words are your footprints in the journey.
ReplyDeleteYou had me with the first line and also with the word "marshmallow"!! Thanks for posting to the prompt!
ReplyDeleteI am glad to say I am not well acquainted with snow (I hate the cold) – but pictures of it are pretty, and your poem conjures up some lovely images and ideas for me.
ReplyDeleteI like that path of footprints.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, Jae!
ReplyDeleteYvette M Calleiro :-)
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