Wednesday, 25 October 2023

Mundane

We are in the kitchen
Making up tomatoes on toast 
We smell like death
It crept up to us
On this day
Alice dips 
A sugary finger in the bowl 
Smiles and waves
She really is a good girl 
We both are
She whispers 
Mother can't take that away
We look out of the window 
All is dark
No stars tonight 
Just the gentle 
Plodding of rain 
Time passing 
Clouds rearranging 
Soon it will be morning 
Another day
Another chance
A place to enjoy
The mundane.

10 comments:

  1. I have always loved mornings, the start of a brand new day, yesterday over...........tomatoes on toast sounds good.

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  2. As we pass through "We smell like death', 'All is dark', our breaths become heavy and thank god there's a sigh of relief at the end : Soon it will be morning.

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  3. I love the way you conjured out of the mundane the 'gentle / Plodding of rain’ and ‘Clouds rearranging’.

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  4. "No stars tonight
    Just the gentle
    Plodding of rain " I love thinking of rain as a person plodding along. Just the daily waiting behind it, and a little hope beyond.

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  5. I think I would enjoy tomatoes on toast. A morning always gives us another chance. Even the mundane is enjoyable in its own way!

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  6. You write such beautiful poetry, Jae! Personally I think mundane moments are often the most special and wonderful in life.

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  7. I agree with Rosemary on both counts

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  8. The smell of death sets the tone.

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  9. Valuing the daily routine enriches our lives in ways we do not expect, Jae. Lovely...

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