Wednesday, 18 October 2023

Hotel

Why are we here
Asks Alice
We are not on holiday 
We have never 
Stayed in an hotel 
We imagine a big red bed
Windows and clouds 
Birds gently 
Humming in the trees
We are alive
Our pulse 
Rests 
Like a calm ocean 
All is peaceful 
A song 
A smile 
Clean sheets 
And heavy curtains 
We will sleep 
Dream and play 
This is our hotel
Magical and real. 

11 comments:

  1. It would be such fun for you and your sister to treat yourselves to a hotel room one day. I have stayed in very few. But it always feels very grand. Though, in the end, my own small rooms are best. I love your closing lines. No place like home. Smiles.

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  2. What a beautiful description of a Hotel I would like to stay in.

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  3. I love how you describe the 'Magical and real' hotel. It is forever.

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  4. It’s strange to imagine Alice in a hotel, and I love the dream hotel you chose to place her in, Jae: the ‘big red bed / Windows and clouds / Birds gently /
    Humming in the trees’. A safe place, where ‘Our pulse / Rests / Like a calm ocean ‘; the perfect place to dream and play.

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  5. ".All is peaceful
    A song
    A smile
    Clean sheets "

    Sounds wonderful, Jae!

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  6. "Our pulse
    Rests
    Like a calm ocean"
    Such a beautiful place! And all the hotels I've stayed in have tried to guarantee their guests such peace. I like that yours has birds in it.

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  7. When all is peaceful, our mind will hum a tune. Lovely lines.

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  8. Fascinating that you imagine a big red bed ~~~ certain there is more to your story.

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  9. You make me feel the coziness of your dream.....beautiful .

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