Wednesday, 6 September 2023

Scent

She leans her head
Into my shoulder
Her hair smells like
Vanilla and peaches
Youth and light 
We will sit for a while 
In the sun
Watch the people go by
Busy and hot
Summer peeps into 
The window 
One last hurrah 
Blue skies
And wasps 
Flowers standing tall
And full of colour 
It makes us sleepy
Ready for bed
Her breathing slows
We are peaceful 
Connected
And strong 
We push the worries away
Dream of brighter things 
Her skin is warm
It lights up the world 
I love the scent of her
The very essence of her being. 

10 comments:

  1. Hi Jae! It’s been a long time since I read your words. I enjoyed the way you traced scent in this poem: ‘vanilla and peaches, youth and light’, and the image of summer peeing into the window – its last hurrah.

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  2. Lovely, Jae, the scent of vanilla, the warmth of the sun, the drowsiness and the dreaming of better things.

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  3. Oooh Jae ... how lovely ... to read of such warm .. feels like a warm bathe of peace in troubled times ... so very welcomed .. beautiful as is connecting with you once again

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  4. Such a lovely scent of summer warmth and caring peeps through your words.

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  5. Beautiful images JR! You brought me right into this moment.

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  6. All the senses come alive in your words. :-)

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  7. All these scents fill me with nostalgia for the summer--and it hasn't even quite left yet.

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  8. I like "vanilla and peaches / Youth and light" too.

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  9. a poem with a good scent and sense.

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