Thursday, 4 December 2025

Perfume And Milk


Perfume and Milk


I love the smell of your skin

Warm as milk on a summer’s day

Full of life yet to live

It is a perfume of comfort - of home and belonging 

Of all the things we lacked

Of all the things we tried to build with sticks and stones

It really has been a battle hasn't it 

One which I feel slow to win - and quick to lose

I hope there will always be hope though

Of brighter days and warmer feelings 

I hope I will never lose you - that I would not bear 

If I have to lie down right now

Count the seconds, minutes, hours - I will 

We have both cheated time and destiny so for each other we can be strong

Whilst Wonderland tumbles around our ankles

Smashed up and forgotten like The Yellow Brick Road

So many tornados and rabbits 

It’s hard to keep track - what is real and not 

What we are meant to know and not

Who we are, who we were meant to be

All so confusing and tiring

The little bottle says drink me and just for one moment I do. 


9 comments:

  1. A lovely poem, Jae, with the sensory comfort that perfume and milk provides being well described by your beautiful words.

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  2. A great poem and the opening is beautiful :I love the smell of your skin
    Warm as milk on a summer’s day/Full of life yet to live/ It is a perfume of comfort - of home and belonging

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  3. Life IS confusing and tiring at times. It's OK to lie down for a little rest and take comfort in a loving presence.

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  4. I love your opening lines too, and then the building of a life with sticks and stones. "So many tornadoes and rabbits" is very well put.

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  5. There is comfort in what we lack. It gives us some momentum. And what we really need is much less than we think.

    Reminds me of a song 'What Do You Give The Man Who's Gotten Everything?'

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  6. If we could only cheat time and destiny...

    Sensitive poem as usual

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  7. I love this, Jae! 'so many tornadoes and rabbits'

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  8. Tornadoes from Oz, as well as rabbits from Wonderland...I like the sense of expanding horizons here.

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