Sunday, 18 December 2011

Tying Knots In The Rain

It is hard to tying knots in the dark
In the rain
When my hands are cold
When my words are drenched
Left under the bush
For safe keeping
Good health
It is one thing to come back to
The place where the bag is safe
Where the thorns pierce my head
But leave no blood
I stumble
Trying to say

I saw a plastic face
A false eye
Skin rebuilt
Behind glass
Untouchable
The power of making

I see all the stops on the line
I must take the red then the blue

It is simple

I am having trouble putting my trousers on
I am having trouble holding the pen
I am having trouble

The words on the barrier say seek assistance
But it is hard to untie knots in the dark.
In the rain.

12 comments:

Kim Nelson said...

It IS hard to tie and untie knots in the dark. Fortune smiles when light enters, illuminating scene and path, making navigation less frightening. Hard still, yes, but light makes all the difference. Light makes the impossible not so.

oldegg said...

What a wonderfully descriptive piece of writing. Those painful steps to achieve the goal in such atrocious conditions are etched on my heart. "If winter comes can spring be far behind?"

Mary said...

Both the dark and the rain do make things difficult. Hopefully, the rain will stop and when the light of day what has been difficult will be done with ease.

Gwen said...

Very moving and well told:)
xx

WrightStuff said...

Intriguing

Ben Ditty said...

It's hard to untie knots in the day sometimes too.

Dee Martin said...

move over and let me share an umbrella - I'm in the rain and the dark with knots too.

Daydreamertoo said...

One day at a time. We need to try to remember, after the rain, comes to rainbow and sometimes knots ease off, slacken and then we can untie them more easily. Wait and untie the knots in the daylight Jae.

Laurie Kolp said...

Amen to daydreamertoo... and sometimes if we just let go of the knot it will loosen.

Ann (bunnygirl) said...

I love the bits about leaving the words under a bush for safekeeping and good health being one thing to come back to. Sometimes good health saves us from our worst instincts, and sometimes it's wise to hide our best words in a safe place.

jaerose said...

Thank you all - for the umbrellas..helping hands and assistance with those pesky knots..Jae

deborah - westlander poetry said...

this line, particularly, got to me (in the best way...)

When my words are drenched

peace,
deborah